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Brenda Allen
By Brenda Allen
Jul 8, 2006, 18:44

Lis turned to look at the man before her.  The first thing she noticed was the ebony black hair that cascaded over his broad shoulders and down his back.  She realized that, unfortunately, the hair detracted from the most amazing eyes she had ever seen.  The palesest gold.  Never seen eyes that color, she thought.  If Mac was a body builder in hiding, this guy was a dancer come to life.  Although loose, his dress shirt hinted at hard muscle, and his form fitting black jeans delivered, emphasizing every curve and hollow of his strong thighs.  Every visible muscle was delineated, although nothing bulged.  Thinking of bulges caused Lis to quickly glance at his crotch.  While the package looked presentable enough, he didn’t seem to measure up to Mac.  Then again, Mac had been happy to see her.  Conrad was not.  Then again, why the hell was she measuring the crotches of these guys?


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